Wattpad Review: Waterfall Psychiatric Hospital by MichelleHM
- Fern Risher
- May 28, 2017
- 1 min read
C H A P T E R 1 * * * * 4 Stars!
{Positives} Great delivery! The plot in itself is very compelling. The mystery is well-put. The emotional build-up of the characters are smooth and vivid. Reader-wise, it's very engaging and exciting to read.
{Negatives} Medium punctuation and grammatical issues.
{Quirks} I loved her escape. It's like an awakening from an unreal world. Great job!
C H A P T E R 2
* * * * 4 Stars!
{Positives} This time around we have that steady progression on that twist you have at the end. The delivery is perfect. The pacing is also great and not boring.
{Negatives} Again, some grammatical and punctuation issues. {Quirks} I love this!!! I saw it coming right there, but the delivery killed it bloody!!!! Well done!!! Please continue!
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