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Wattpad Review: The Gilded (Chapter 1) by ChrispyWheat

  • Fern Risher
  • May 30, 2017
  • 1 min read

C H A P T E R 1 * * * * 4 Stars!

{Positives} The blurb is great and very engaging. You started off the chapter quite interesting. Your writing style is very crisp and neat with right balanced elements.

{Negatives} The paragraphs are too chunked up together; it would be better if you digest it into different paragraphs to avoid congestion. Most of the times the paragraphs are suggested to have a maximum of six lines only.

 
 
 

Comments

The Quirky Novelist (Fern Risher) dedicated her life to read books. She believes that further reading may lead her to her forever book boyfriend and might help her in forging her writing skills as well. 

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Her blog was made in order to (of course, eherm) promote her works and help other aspiring authors out there in the vast sea of terrifying sharks to spread out their fins and let their works be known.

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