Wattpad Review: The Gilded (Chapter 1) by ChrispyWheat
C H A P T E R 1 * * * * 4 Stars!
{Positives} The blurb is great and very engaging. You started off the chapter quite interesting. Your writing style is very crisp and neat with right balanced elements.
{Negatives} The paragraphs are too chunked up together; it would be better if you digest it into different paragraphs to avoid congestion. Most of the times the paragraphs are suggested to have a maximum of six lines only.