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Wattpad Review: Staff of Strison (Chapter 1) by emilycarlucci

  • Fern Risher
  • May 25, 2017
  • 1 min read

* * * 3 Stars!

{Positives} The opening line is very effective; the readers will definitely be stoked in reading the chapter. Another great point is your characterization-- your characters are well-differentiated from one another. I would love to see them develop through the next chapter. The idea, itself, is solid. The way you ended the chapter leaves me wanting to know more.

{Negatives} Since this is a novel that will bring the readers into a different world, it would be better if you could utilize the five senses more. Illustration and delivery can be improved. I believe your skill that you can still arrange the thought in a more understandable manner.

{Quirks} Your main character's voice is very interesting and engaging! Keep it up! The story can be further improved. The plot is interesting and well-thought of. I believe that this can head start your writing career here in Wattpad.

 
 
 

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The Quirky Novelist (Fern Risher) dedicated her life to read books. She believes that further reading may lead her to her forever book boyfriend and might help her in forging her writing skills as well. 

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Her blog was made in order to (of course, eherm) promote her works and help other aspiring authors out there in the vast sea of terrifying sharks to spread out their fins and let their works be known.

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