Wattpad Review: The Beginning of Sorta Greatness (Chapters 1-2) by DizzyFromSherbet
- Fern Risher
- May 29, 2017
- 1 min read
C H A P T E R 1 * * * * 3.5 Stars!
{Positives} Your introduction and opening is great. It really drew me closer to chapter as a reader. Your grammar is also great and near to being neat and flawless.
{Negatives} (') should be (") when it comes to dialogue. Also, the paragraphs are too chunked up together; it would be better if you digest it into different paragraphs to avoid congestion.
C H A P T E R 2
* * * 3 Stars!
{Positives} The writing again is near to neatness. The voice of your character is very realistic and relatable as well. It's good that the story is finally unfolding.
{Negatives} Same quotation issues and somehow this chapter needs an "oomph factor to engage the readers read further. However, still a great job!
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