Wattpad Review: A Price to Pay (Chapter 1) by @rayytbh

* * * * 3. 5 Stars!

{Positives} That nice shift and twist! Perfectly crafted. I commend the transition and the delivery of the story as a whole. It's that sudden turn in an indie movie, which you never saw coming at all. Although this is just the first part, it's very exciting and and interesting making the readers seek for more answers in the succeeding chapters.

{Negatives} Punctuation-wise and some grammatical issues can be solved by hiring an editor or even proof-reading the chapter yourself. There were some simple things that can make this chapter at its best: like not saying she got naked as it is understood that she was since she took a bath. From there, you were kinda' giving the readers that there's something about to happen with her nakedness. HAHAHA! Personally, I would prefer it if you approach them by surprise.

{Quirks} Wonderful chapter!!! I love it in terms of how you were able to deliver the scenes and the build-up. Wooh! It wasn an intense on right there. I believe this can be a successful one. I hope one day when I come to re-visit this work again, I will be able to read what happens next.

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