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Wattpad Review: Ameena (Chapters 1-2) by tseasterling

  • Fern Risher
  • May 28, 2017
  • 1 min read

C H A P T E R 1 * * * 3 Stars!

{Positives} Your writing is near to being neat and crisp. Just a few tweaking will do the perfection. I love the build-up and the progression of this chapter.

{Negatives} There were some punctuation issues that were minor. Like what other critics suggested, the first chapter could be better if started with a blast or some kind of a POV narration or maybe in medias res.

{Quirks} You have an interesting plot here and it's obvious right from the first chapter.

C H A P T E R 2 ​

* * * 3 Stars!

{Positives} The plot is still visibly great and I commend on the characters' realism in terms of thoughts and dialogues.

{Negatives} Again, some grammatical and punctuation issues. This does not damage the whole chapter itself, however it will make the delivery more successful.

 
 
 

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The Quirky Novelist (Fern Risher) dedicated her life to read books. She believes that further reading may lead her to her forever book boyfriend and might help her in forging her writing skills as well. 

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