Wattpad Reviews: Two Ghosts, The Unknown Town, Soft Hearts & A Change for the Better
- Fern Risher
- Jun 26, 2017
- 1 min read
4 S T A R S | PROLOGUE
The Prologue is written very neatly and the main character's voice is very engaging. Atop that, adding songs in between made this chapter more-of experiential and I loved it. You ended the chapter very well!
4 S T A R S | ONE & TWO
The first chapter has a clean grammar and the idea of the story itself is very unique and interesting. The descriptions are average but well-put.
3 S T A R S | ONE
The first chapter has great potential in terms of how the idea was delivered. The grammar is near to flawless that didn't compensate the quality of this part.However, you have a tendency here to more declarative than descriptive.
Try to sprinkle more of the vivid descriptions here. Moreover, it is advisable that you shall just limit your paragraphs with a maximum of 6 lines in order to portray the ideas with brevity and concisely.
3 S T A R S | PROLOGUE & ONE
I love the concept of this story, which is very evident in this prologue. Your descriptions and delivery is great as well as your grammar.There are just few misuse of punctuation marks, which can be fixed and would not compensate the chapter as a whole.
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