Wattpad Review: Signed, The Lost Boy (Chapters 1-4) by KennedyLee
- Fern Risher
- May 31, 2017
- 1 min read
C H A P T E R 1 * * * * 4 Stars!
{Positives} Great introduction and opening for the story. The writing style is very neat and readable. Pace-wise the story is cruising well and the descriptions are on-point.
{Negatives} Too much pronouns, however. Minimal improvement on character introduction.
C H A P T E R 2 * * * * 4 Stars!
{Positives} Great build-up here!!! Plus, the emotional impact is getting stronger but at the same time it doesn't compensate the flow of the story. Amazing and still an interesting read!
{Negatives} I think on the Help Desk section of Wattpad you can find the suggested length of the chapters to avoid being too long or short.
C H A P T E R 3 * * * * * 5 Stars!
{Positives} This one is perfect! Everything positive that I have said beforehand was maintained and the parts that were quite negative before were improved. Great!
C H A P T E R 4 * * * * * 5 Stars!
{Positives} Aside from my in line comment, I am out of words here since this is a perfect chapter. From the vivid description, exchange of dialogues, emotional build-up and most especially the character development.
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