Wattpad Review: Wild Darkness by @xMalloryx3
- Fern Risher
- Aug 8, 2016
- 2 min read
"I remember when I was a little girl, and everyone would tell me that I was such a lucky girl. They told me that I was privileged and blessed; however, when I stood in front of my parents' coffins at the tender age of fifteen, I had felt everything and anything but."-Rhiannon White
From her parents' death to the unmentionable breakup with her boyfriend, Rhiannon White's life has been going everywhere but up.
Then add waking up in a hospital room and learning that you are not human, and throw in some weird dreams, a prophecy, a mysterious man, and a long lost brother--Rhiannon has no time to be stuck in the past.
Will Rhiannon be able to win against the enemies of her family who wish to harm her? Will she find all of the secrets about her true identity in time? Or will she fail--dooming all of her people to darkness?
P R O L O G U E
* * * * * 5 Stars!
{Positives} What really stands out in this episode is the element of mystery. The scenes will make you crave for more information regarding the story. The dialogue between the mother and child is also very endearing and it adds up to the chapter's emotional value.
{Inner-queen} Cedric is just so cuuute... Damn the scenes after that are so intense!!! Can't wait for more!
C H A P T E R 1
* * * * 4 Stars!
{Positives} I am impressed with the character introduction and the magnetism between the Rhiannon and Connor, you have a very great scene depiction there.
{Negative} I am expecting for more push to happen in this chapter... Like more significant scenes.
{Inner-queen} The one that really caught my attention is the scene between Rhiannon and Connor plus the bright attitude of her friend!!!
C H A P T E R 2
* * * * 4 Stars!
{Positives} The last part is the main catch!!! The thrill, the revelation and the enigma is so there. Hands down on it. Anyway, I also love the 'perfection' part and her idea about people's perspectives. I like Rhiannon's thoughts and logic.
{Negative} The mid-scenes is a bit off for me... It's kind of lack-luster, but come on... The last part is so cool!
{Inner-queen} Yes, that's what I'm waiting for some heart-pumping unexpected events!
C H A P T E R 3
* * * * 4 Stars!
{Positives} The author really has the habit of placing the juicy parts at the last part!!! This is a fast-paced chapter that doesn't bother me. I liked it when there are clues scattered everywhere in the story. The journalthing too is an effective device for the readers to know the MC really well.
{Negative}The framing in this chapter lacks some color in it. Nevertheless, this is still a good read.
{Inner-queen} Uh-huh! Date with Connor! All ye girls out there will surely pee their mother-lovin' pants!
Wild Darkness is a read that will have you searching for more information about its mysterious backstory. Its writer, @xMalloryx3, has great musings that will surely make you ponder.
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