Wattpad Review: Restless Heartbeats @rainbowpetal17
- Fern Risher
- Jul 26, 2016
- 2 min read
He stares at her in awe, as their eyes connect. She can feel her heartbeat increasing, as his light grey eyes twinkle with wonder. Sophia comes from a traditional Pakistani background. She is in the middle of completing her University degree, when she gets roped into an arranged marriage. Will she refuse the proposal and suffer the consequences, or will she fall in love with a stranger she has never met?
C H A P T E R 1
* * * * * 5 Stars!
{Positives}I love how the author properly and engagingly introduce a different culture to the readers, especially when the different cultures and traditions are being explained in a smooth manner. Your grammar is also great, there's nothing that I found wrong. I believe that this is the character introduction part and you just did it justice.
{Inner-queen} I have lots of Pakistani and Indian friends and somehow I relate them very much in your story. Basically, this chapter is sort of a tease for me and I wanna know more!
C H A P T E R 2
* * * * 4 Stars!
{Positives} What I immensely liked in this chapter is the brewing excitement and it becomes gradually interesting as the plot thickens.
{Negatives} I loved a fast-paced storyline, however, there is so much character introduced in this chapter. Be cautious, the readers might be confused if they didn't read keenly.
{Inner-queen} Wow, wow, wow! I love your castsss!!! Well, I guess, those guys I know of. They are really hooot!
Restless Heartbeats, by @rainbowpetal17 is a story that will open new doors for an insight regarding different cultures. It's fast-paced and never dull. Definitely, something worth a try.
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