Wattpad Review: Ebby Flint and the Sword of Sorrows @STAlbert [Part 2]
- Fern Risher
- Jul 25, 2016
- 2 min read
C H A P T E R 4
* * * * 4 Stars!
{Positives} Above all the chapters I've read, this is by far the best. I like how the emotions and substance flow in this chapter. There is that little pinch in the heart, when the truth about her past is revealed. Aside from that, I love the little background about ARTIS. This chapter is the break-out chapter that will make the readers read more.
{Negatives} The entrance is not as interested as what comes after it. Nevertheless, it's not much of a big deal.
{Inner-queen} Aww!!! I've been yearning to know more about Ebby's past!!! It is heart-wrenching and I love the emotional trigger of this chapter. Add the fact that I am a Lord of the Rings fanatic!!! I love the theme and still love the idea.
C H A P T E R 5
* * * * 4 Stars!
{Positives} Unlike Chapter 4, this one has the most attention-grabbing entrance of all the Ebby Flint's chapter. I like how the pun is inserted in order to lighten the mood after the somewhat dramatic end of the 4th chapter. Now, Ebby's character is gaining significant substance.
{Negatives} Maybe a little more connection with the previous chapter would make this chapter a five-star worth. I just lost the connection, maybe because of its fast-pace track. Nonetheless, still a great chapter!
{Inner-queen} Wow, wow, wow! The chapter that makes me like the novel more. I hope you continue writing this because your plot and the information you crafted is very interesting. If written well, I'll bet this would hit in the Watty universe.
Ebby Flint and the Sword of Sorrows is a novel that will take you to another realm. The more you get deeper in the story, the more you'll be able to crave for more of it.
Things I'd love to see: Maybe, I like Marcus to be in Artis too. I like his persona and he seems very interesting for me. Meh. Just my petty dream, though.
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