Wattpad Review: Dreams are forever by @teenagebookworm_
- Fern Risher
- Jul 22, 2016
- 2 min read
"They say if you dream a thing more than once, it's sure to come true," I tell my daughter Shelby, quoting her favourite Disney character and trying to believe it myself.
Ever since I introduced Shelby to her first Disney film, she's dreamed of working at Disney World. What could seem better to an eleven year old than being a beautiful princess at the happiest place on Earth?
My Shelby might not be like the other children in her class. But who says different is wrong? She's simply a little girl with big dreams.
"Do not be fooled by its commonplace appearance. Like so many things, it is not what is outside, but what is inside that counts." - Aladdin
C H A P T E R 1
* * * * 4 . 5 Stars!
{Positives} This chapter is simply good. Period. The author clearly described the scenes very well. When it was mentioned the word signed, I already picked it up that Shelby is deaf. In speaking of Shelby, I love characterization in this chapter. The way the mother blamed herself for the accident of her daughter was so genuine and was explained in a very touching manner.
{Negatives} A piece of advice would be, to limit the lines of some of the paragraphs. Too long of a chunk might disinterest the readers. Also, I look forward to the mother's characterization the next chapter.
{Inner-queen} Sometimes in life, we have to prioritize what really matters. Yes, that's it! When I've read this line, I knew for sure that I'd be inspired just by reading your work.
C H A P T E R 2
* * * * 4 . 5 Stars!
{Positives} This chapter is positively touching! Again, the description is very vivid, as usual and the author really described Shelby's reaction so well it's painfully heart-warming. I also empathize the mother and how remorseful she is with Shelby's accident.
{Negatives} Same minor flaws as before, not much to say.
{Inner-queen} I have been to Disney World Magic Kingdom already and this chapter took me again to that very wonderful memory back then. I was just so happy how you were able to transmit the Disney feels through your work!
A very inspiring and heart-warming book for everyone! A piece of art that would take you to Disney World and makes you reminisce about your good old childhood. The author doesn't fail to make us appreciate what we have by introducing us to a character like Shelby. Definitely, a must-read!
A glittery and magical salute to @teenagebookworm_, the one who created this such an inspirational novel. Continue to inspire more people!
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